I do like the piece, especially the little futuristic touches like the guy smoking outside, but I find the "no choking" sign to be strange, even for a dystopian setting. That's not the kind of thing made permanent in neon. Usually things meant to attract customers are put in neon, right? They'd probably put "topless" or something like that in neon. "No choking" is more like a hand-made sign slapped onto the front door after too many incidents. I'm also disturbed how many commenters say the sign made them laugh. WTF.
really great atmosphere, gives you a good impression how this environment feels. not so excited about the house in the background though, because it seems unfinished. I think, it would look better without a real background in this case, because the foreground is so nicely done. if there were just smoke or fog I wouldn't really mind other than that a great piece!